Background Check

Before I post/finalize my complete background, I'd like to check that two things I'm stating would make sense/be okay and not being too "over the top":

1. Fenodyree has worked on repairing and crafting armour for the Stormwind City Watch.  His master at the time had a contract to do this (as one of a few smiths given such contracts) and sub-contracted the work out to me.   So I'm not saying I'm the only smith doing this but one of them.
   
2. Fenodyree has become enlisted in the City Watch.  As a dwarf this makes him rare but not unique.
   

Thoughts and comments on these ideas?

Fenodyree wrote:Fenodyree has worked on repairing and crafting armour for the Stormwind City Watch.  His master at the time had a contract to do this (as one of a few smiths given such contracts) and sub-contracted the work out to me.   So I'm not saying I'm the only smith doing this but one of them.

Makes sense for the military to commission specific smiths that they know to be able to achieve a certain standard of quality. Militaries in general tend to prefer "quality stuff", since faulty equipment can mean the loss of lives and in worst case, loosing a war.

Fenodyree wrote:Fenodyree has become enlisted in the City Watch.  As a dwarf this makes him rare but not unique.

Legion Stormwind Spoilers:

Dwarves and Humans are strong allies, so there is no reason why a Dwarf could not work together with their Human allies to safeguard eachother cities. Obviously such are less in numbers, but they exist.

Great stuff. It seems my background has pretty much come together now. I'll post it on here when I can figure out where...

Cheers
Feno