Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
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Antistia
Skarain
James
Geneviève
Lexgrad
Dréfurion
Sullee Swiftspeech
Lyv
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Kristeas Sunbinder
Frostfeather
Maelmoor
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
O Flower of Stormwind,
When will we, see your like again,
That fought and died for
Your hill and Elwynn.
And stood against him,
WHO!
Blackhand's Horde,
BASTARD!
And sent him homeward
To think again.
When will we, see your like again,
That fought and died for
Your hill and Elwynn.
And stood against him,
WHO!
Blackhand's Horde,
BASTARD!
And sent him homeward
To think again.
Lexgrad- Posts : 6140
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Age : 41
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
The Lordaeron one would sound like this...
And the Arathorian one like this
ETA one for the chapt...Anethioneans.
And the Arathorian one like this
ETA one for the chapt...Anethioneans.
Lexgrad- Posts : 6140
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Frostfeather wrote:So when do I get my gold?
Pfff please, as if!!! It's MY gold MINE!!!!
Although all the other entries sure are amazing (but violated the max 2-3 verse rule BAHAHAHA suckers!!!)
Shaelyssa- Posts : 4926
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Name: Shaelyssa Bladesinger
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
My two cents.
Light bless the human conquest
Of Azeroth's heart and minds alike
No darkest hour we cannot defend
Glory and no less for humankind!
Long have we fought an' struggled
In our noble need to survive
Various of our brethren have fallen
Even if in our souls, they are alive!
Strong and steadfast is our city an' king
Throned amidst endless green lands
O how I long for it's grandeur an' taverns!
Restin' on the Cathedral's solemn floors I plead
May these walls never yield!
Where was there ever a kingdom so victorious
In all o' the continents alike
No doubt clouds me mind as I raise my cup an' cry:
Death for Stormwind is the sweetest death to die!
Light bless the human conquest
Of Azeroth's heart and minds alike
No darkest hour we cannot defend
Glory and no less for humankind!
Long have we fought an' struggled
In our noble need to survive
Various of our brethren have fallen
Even if in our souls, they are alive!
Strong and steadfast is our city an' king
Throned amidst endless green lands
O how I long for it's grandeur an' taverns!
Restin' on the Cathedral's solemn floors I plead
May these walls never yield!
Where was there ever a kingdom so victorious
In all o' the continents alike
No doubt clouds me mind as I raise my cup an' cry:
Death for Stormwind is the sweetest death to die!
Lyv- Posts : 66
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Stupid round ears!Shaelyssa wrote:Although all the other entries sure are amazing (but violated the max 2-3 verse rule BAHAHAHA suckers!!!)
Frostfeather- Posts : 227
Join date : 2010-02-11
Location : Sweden
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Name: Khalida Frostfeather
Title: Sentinel
Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Jeanpierre/Ragnilde wrote:I didn't get further than this myself...
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Hark! When the night is falling
Hear, Hear! the pipes are calling,
Loudly and proudly calling, down through the keep.
There where the hills are sleeping,
Now feel the blood a-leaping,
High as the spirits of the old Stormwind men.
Chorus
(Towering in gallant fame,
Stormwind my mountain hame,
High may your proud standards gloriously wave,
Land of my high endeavour,
Land of the shining river,
Land of my heart for ever, Stormwind the brave.)
Chorus
Deep in the Elwynn Forrest,
Out by the Westfall lands,
Brave are the hearts that beat beneath Allied skies.
Wild are the winds to meet you,
Staunch are the friends that greet you,
Kind as the love that shines from fair maidens' eyes.
Chorus
Far off in sunlit places,
Sad are the Stormwind faces,
Yearning to feel the kiss of sweet Stormwind rain.
Where tropic skies are beaming,
Love sets the heart a-dreaming,
Longing and dreaming for the homeland again.
Chorus
And then..
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Alright, I admit I wasn't entirely serious there. I was wondering if we could actually manage to get English folk to sing this...
This one's for Scotland in gratitude for their whiskies!
I'm english, i'll sing it!
Lephia- Posts : 115
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Age : 35
Location : Lincolnshire
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
No further submissions will be considered. The selected song will be announced during the weekend. Thank you all for participating.
Aleric- Posts : 378
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 39
Location : Luleå, Sweden
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Name: Sir Aleric Dylain
Title: Knight
Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
For hitting the very definitions of an anthem – dry, verbose and bombastic – as well as tying the lyrics to relevant pieces of Stormwind history, Talasseus has created a piece that will make men and women rise up in patriotic salute. May this anthem be on the lips of every die-hard patriot of fair Stormwind.
Talasseus will receive a royal reward of two thousand gold crowns.
I would like to thank the other contestants, (in no particular order) Frostbeard, Shaelyssa and Lyv, for participating and sharing their creativity with the community. I can imagine all of them being sung in the taverns of Stormwind, with various skill, in the future. You will receive a participation prize of five hundred gold crowns each.
March to Glory
From the purest blood of royalty,
To the humblest man in peasantry,
We all praise and serve our Stormwind fair,
Let those who stand against her know despair!
Tested by the thorns of hist’ry,
Our people yet endured.
From the sacrifice of Lothar,
To the reclamation,
These tests we overcame,
By strength, wit and faith!
Blessed by the Light and yearning,
for the golden years!
When peace once ruled and the fields were green
Yes the Golden Days of our King Llane
But falter not, for what has once been seen;
As we strive together, they will come again
Blessed be both Lothar,
And King Llane,
Your noblest sacrifice,
was not in vain
Honored be both Lothar,
And King Llane,
For their memory endures,
As do their fame!
[purely orchestral from 1:21-1:41]
Children of our Stormwind fair,
Rise up now, the time is near!
When steely boot and judging sword,
Shall give us,
Righteous vengeance, at the Horde!
So now march, my sons, and daughters!
Never shall you falter!
Neither shall your king!
P.S Please forward the name of the character you wish the gold to be delivered to. D.S
Talasseus will receive a royal reward of two thousand gold crowns.
I would like to thank the other contestants, (in no particular order) Frostbeard, Shaelyssa and Lyv, for participating and sharing their creativity with the community. I can imagine all of them being sung in the taverns of Stormwind, with various skill, in the future. You will receive a participation prize of five hundred gold crowns each.
March to Glory
From the purest blood of royalty,
To the humblest man in peasantry,
We all praise and serve our Stormwind fair,
Let those who stand against her know despair!
Tested by the thorns of hist’ry,
Our people yet endured.
From the sacrifice of Lothar,
To the reclamation,
These tests we overcame,
By strength, wit and faith!
Blessed by the Light and yearning,
for the golden years!
When peace once ruled and the fields were green
Yes the Golden Days of our King Llane
But falter not, for what has once been seen;
As we strive together, they will come again
Blessed be both Lothar,
And King Llane,
Your noblest sacrifice,
was not in vain
Honored be both Lothar,
And King Llane,
For their memory endures,
As do their fame!
[purely orchestral from 1:21-1:41]
Children of our Stormwind fair,
Rise up now, the time is near!
When steely boot and judging sword,
Shall give us,
Righteous vengeance, at the Horde!
So now march, my sons, and daughters!
Never shall you falter!
Neither shall your king!
P.S Please forward the name of the character you wish the gold to be delivered to. D.S
Last edited by Aleric on Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:03 am; edited 1 time in total
Aleric- Posts : 378
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Title: Knight
Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Congratulations, well deserved!
Frostfeather- Posts : 227
Join date : 2010-02-11
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Name: Khalida Frostfeather
Title: Sentinel
Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
I agree! Congrats!
Lyv- Posts : 66
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Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Wow, first of all thank you all for the positive responses, and more recently the congratulations! I'm a bit overwhelmed to see you actually liked my submission enough to use it. And from a completely evolved, mature perspective, as a Hordie at heart I feel slightly dirty.
Aleric, you are free to set your own title to it if you wish, I had assumed it would simply be referred to as "the anthem (of Stormwind)", but if you push me I guess I can suggest one of my own also... Since the music used is called "March to Glory", and the final two stanzas are pretty much a call to arms, perhaps simply go with that. The reason I wrote this to begin with is because I thought it a nice tribute to "the good old days" of Warcraft 2, so... perhaps keeping the original title can be seen as credit where credit is due?
As for what character should receive the gold... my only Alliance character is "Arnkel", no apostrophes or anything like that. I would be content with just receiving the sum OOCly by mail, and you would be free to credit the IC writing of the anthem to whomever you wish. Given his chaotic nature, Arnkel COULD have submitted the song in his own name after plundering it from some unfortunate bard or suchlike, but I can see some rather problematic points with ICly attributing the national anthem of Stormwind to a violent criminal.
Aleric, you are free to set your own title to it if you wish, I had assumed it would simply be referred to as "the anthem (of Stormwind)", but if you push me I guess I can suggest one of my own also... Since the music used is called "March to Glory", and the final two stanzas are pretty much a call to arms, perhaps simply go with that. The reason I wrote this to begin with is because I thought it a nice tribute to "the good old days" of Warcraft 2, so... perhaps keeping the original title can be seen as credit where credit is due?
As for what character should receive the gold... my only Alliance character is "Arnkel", no apostrophes or anything like that. I would be content with just receiving the sum OOCly by mail, and you would be free to credit the IC writing of the anthem to whomever you wish. Given his chaotic nature, Arnkel COULD have submitted the song in his own name after plundering it from some unfortunate bard or suchlike, but I can see some rather problematic points with ICly attributing the national anthem of Stormwind to a violent criminal.
Tyrós/Cále- Posts : 147
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Name: Cale Lightsinger
Title: Patriarch
Re: Commission For Writing The National Anthem of Stormwind
Amazing work Talasseus!
I was working so long on this, that I am entirely late with posting. But just for the sake of it:
Praised be the Light,
by thine grace and guidance,
with thine blessing and sanction,
rose from the green our kingdom belov'ed!
Between the thunder of seas,
beneath the shadow of mountains,
across the wilds and marshes,
our ancestors carried the flame of Arathor!
Praised be the Light,
thou who sent us Lothar and Uther,
thou who cast away the darkness of evil,
and made our kingdom reborn from the ashes!
O' Light, have mercy upon me!
I am born of this glorious land,
I carry the flame of Arathor,
I stand in the shadow of Lothar and Uther,
O' Light, give me the strength to carry this weight!
O' Light, give me strength!
I am born into a world of heroes,
I carry the flame of my fathers,
I am the light of Arathor, I am the son of this land!
O' Light, give my children the strength to carry this weight!
O' Light, bless our Kingdom belov'ed,
let its glory endure the passage of time,
let our sons carry the flame of Arathor,
like we've carried it through the darkest of nights!
I was working so long on this, that I am entirely late with posting. But just for the sake of it:
Praised be the Light,
by thine grace and guidance,
with thine blessing and sanction,
rose from the green our kingdom belov'ed!
Between the thunder of seas,
beneath the shadow of mountains,
across the wilds and marshes,
our ancestors carried the flame of Arathor!
Praised be the Light,
thou who sent us Lothar and Uther,
thou who cast away the darkness of evil,
and made our kingdom reborn from the ashes!
O' Light, have mercy upon me!
I am born of this glorious land,
I carry the flame of Arathor,
I stand in the shadow of Lothar and Uther,
O' Light, give me the strength to carry this weight!
O' Light, give me strength!
I am born into a world of heroes,
I carry the flame of my fathers,
I am the light of Arathor, I am the son of this land!
O' Light, give my children the strength to carry this weight!
O' Light, bless our Kingdom belov'ed,
let its glory endure the passage of time,
let our sons carry the flame of Arathor,
like we've carried it through the darkest of nights!
Melnerag- Posts : 2261
Join date : 2010-01-29
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