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Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Elloa Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:57 pm
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Whitestar Magazine n°2
in all cities and villages of Alliance territories
Booty Bay, Gadgedzan, Dalaran and Shattrah
Whitestar Magazine n°2
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Gunnell Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:17 pm
(( Reading through it now, the grammar seems to have improved a fair bit, then kind of sinks back into a load of mistakes as you get further and further down the, uhm.. paper?
Will give a proper write up once I'm doing something other than skim reading. I suggest you look over.. or rather have a few people give it a once over to correct it and then edit it (I presume you 'can' edit these blog-esq things). Whilst it can't be said a good amount of effort has gone into this, losing those mistakes would help the presentation alot.
Still not a huge fan of the more 'modern' style of it, but i'll save that for another time. ))
Will give a proper write up once I'm doing something other than skim reading. I suggest you look over.. or rather have a few people give it a once over to correct it and then edit it (I presume you 'can' edit these blog-esq things). Whilst it can't be said a good amount of effort has gone into this, losing those mistakes would help the presentation alot.
Still not a huge fan of the more 'modern' style of it, but i'll save that for another time. ))
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Elloa Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:23 pm
Chléirich/Gunnell/Graham wrote:Reading through it now, the grammar seems to have improved a fair bit, then kind of sinks back into a load of mistakes as you get further and further down the, uhm.. paper?
My boyfriend only had the time to proof-read 2 of my articles. The rest I've done myself. I've been super carefull, but my knowledge of english is limited (this really annoy me, but I really can't do better without class) and the magazine had to be out today. If not it will be too late (cause of Cataclym) and look stupid. It should be corrected along the week though :p
Anyway, you can role play this and send a letter of indignation, could be fun !
Now you have talk about the typo..are the articles interestings ?
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Braiden Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:36 pm
OOC: Baron Mistmantle approves of the glorifying article about his selflessness and greatness. /me picks up the latest issue of whitestar magazine and puts it next to the wine and cheese platter on the table.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Gunnell Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:36 pm
Elloa wrote:
My boyfriend only had the time to proof-read 2 of my articles. The rest I've done myself. I've been super carefull, but my knowledge of english is limited (this really annoy me, but I really can't do better without class) and the magazine had to be out today. If not it will be too late (cause of Cataclym) and look stupid. It should be corrected along the week though :p
As shown on the 'New Defias website' forums, there would be a fair few people who would likely be willing to proof read.
Anyway, you can role play this and send a letter of indignation, could be fun !
"Teh Squids are stealing us jeerrbss, now dey are wreeting der alien propoganda in our papers! Kick 'em arrrttt!"
are the articles interestings ?
The articles themselves served as a decent round up of what had occured for those (including myself) who did not attend them for whatever reason, so yes I suppose you could say they were interesting - I'd say informative but then I suppose that is the whole point anyway.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Guest Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:45 pm
Yeah I admire the effort alot, there's a HUGE amount of stuff in it, but I have to agree about this "modern" look it has to it that reminds me of all those flashy magazines in shops I see but never go near xD
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Alakina Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:51 am
As for me i had my own corrector this time...i would like to thank Torukan lots of time again for his work with my articles 
And the modern looks of it, just satisfy me alot, i hate old yellowtoned looking photos...some of you think its great...me think its boring. i will never be editor-in-chief for a magazine with such boring pictures.
Snapshotters ftw!
And the modern looks of it, just satisfy me alot, i hate old yellowtoned looking photos...some of you think its great...me think its boring. i will never be editor-in-chief for a magazine with such boring pictures.
Snapshotters ftw!
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Drustai Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:27 am
If Drustai wasn't so busy with worrying about the whole 'end of the world' thing, she'd send in a complaint about being outed as an undead publically like that, in the Diaspora House article. Not only does that mar her own future interactions with people, but it could make people leery of coming to the Diaspora House ("there's death knights there? I'm going to stay away!").
Anyway, good reads. If you need editing in the future, feel free ask me, and I could look over them for you.
Anyway, good reads.
If you need editing in the future, feel free ask me, and I could look over them for you.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Alakina Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:29 am
i think we all have lived amongst death knights so long to know that some of them inst so bad att all. alakina is in love with one.
if you want you can send a letter of complaint to me (alakina) IC and tell me that you dont want Whitestar to mention you are a dead knight in future magazines.
if you want you can send a letter of complaint to me (alakina) IC and tell me that you dont want Whitestar to mention you are a dead knight in future magazines.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Muzjhath Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:15 am
Only thing after a quick skim through I can mention is that I doubt a paper would mention a judge's pregnant partner as a "Girlfriend" if it wasn't through wedlock. It would most likely be "Mistress is carrying his bastard". It's enough to go back to the 1930ties and in many countries even in the "western" world that would be a big shame on any family, in the society that is Azeroth I'd say it would be more so.
Just a tip that for me would make it feel more immersive.
Just a tip that for me would make it feel more immersive.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Alakina Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:56 am
i dont know what to answer to this, since he i interviewed used the word girlfriend himself.
But thanks for the tip and i will make sure i dont use the "girlfriend" word anymore
But thanks for the tip and i will make sure i dont use the "girlfriend" word anymore
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Gunnell Tue Nov 23, 2010 3:31 pm
Alakina wrote:i think we all have lived amongst death knights so long to know that some of them inst so bad att all. alakina is in love with one.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Alakina Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:02 pm
i will just ignore that one.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Magaskawee/Anaei Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:08 pm
Alakina wrote:i think we all have lived amongst death knights so long to know that some of them inst so bad att all. alakina is in love with one.
..Love.. /cringe
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Sanara Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:31 pm
Alakina wrote:i will just ignore that one.
You shouldn't. It has a point.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Jayse Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:34 pm
The magazine was awesome very good work! But.. Yea..
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Geldar Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:35 pm
I advise to stick to the subject of the thread, which is the Whitestar Magazine unless you wish me to clean this thread
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Cathee Norris Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:44 pm
I have a question. I will of course need to put this up on the newspapers list. But, should I keep the old versions there too or, what to do? :O
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Elloa Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:03 pm
Julia, yes you can keep the old version (WHitestar News + Whitestar News 2), as it's memories and also it's explained in our guild background, it's part of our story.
if it's what you are talking about ... if not...You can simply link the blog. As it's a blog everything is saved on the same link anyway.
I've have announced it here on the forum in a new thread as we are not well known yet
@ Drustai : poor little Tintam who wanted to impress with her first article ! you can be mad at her ! It will be fun (Elloa have noothing to do with what tintam is writting btw *save her skin*)
@ The story of Alakina and Viljius Morte is a cute story *nod nod* Too bad he is not playing anymore
We need to find a new (and active) lover for Alakina ! Yep !
if it's what you are talking about ... if not...You can simply link the blog. As it's a blog everything is saved on the same link anyway.
I've have announced it here on the forum in a new thread as we are not well known yet
@ Drustai : poor little Tintam who wanted to impress with her first article ! you can be mad at her ! It will be fun
(Elloa have noothing to do with what tintam is writting btw *save her skin*)@ The story of Alakina and Viljius Morte is a cute story *nod nod* Too bad he is not playing anymore
We need to find a new (and active) lover for Alakina ! Yep !
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Jayse Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:10 pm
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Cathee Norris Sun Nov 28, 2010 10:57 pm
Finally added the blog link to the newspapers list. Sorry it took so long :S
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Braiden Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:41 pm
Well the Baron could use a nice propagandamachine... errhm ehh uhh woman to court!Elloa wrote:We need to find a new (and active) lover for Alakina ! Yep !
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Gunnell Mon Nov 29, 2010 8:04 pm
Elloa wrote:We need to find a new (and active) lover for Alakina ! Yep !
Hopefully one that isn't decomposing.
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Re: Whitestar Magazine : next issue (updated 17-01-11)
by Elloa Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:51 am
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