Whitestar Magazine nr 1

here is the site for our newley printed magazine.

Dont hesitate to give us feedback about it, we want to be better in making it.

Whitestar Magazine

One gold 34 silver... dear Light! Farmers will have to starve their children and abandon them in the woods to sustain their whitestar magazine subscription.

OOCly of course, it is well worth it

Actually, I have no real measure of the value of gold in the game. I always assumed that one gold still was a whole lot of money ICly.

Looks way too modern for my liking

One gold 34 silver... dear Light! Farmers will have to starve their children and abandon them in the woods to sustain their whitestar magazine subscription

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Oh yes, but that's a deluxe magazine, aimed for adventurer and heroes who can't complain about it...haha

Well...I've also no clue about how people use the value of wealth on a role play server. If you follow the scale of money in game, we are in the right ladder, considering the prize of honey tea for example....
Now, indeed... if on Defias Brotherhood money have another scale..we may be a bit too high ! Don't pay too much attention to it in that case, cause we want to sell it for a reasonable prise. More expansive than others newspaper who are not printed in color thou !

Looks way too modern for my liking

I understand what you mean. But on a Blog support we are also kinda limited. This is why we choose that look finaly.
Originaly, we were supposed to have a totaly different support, but our webdesigner is too buzy in real life, so we had to find a solution that we (Alakina and I) can handel alone...And we don't know anything about web design and coding ^^

Good

I'd like to order two.

Jeanpierre/Jeanclaude wrote:I'd like to order two.

Well well... Look at the rich man, prancing around with this bag of four gold

Ben, I need one for the archives.... and one because I'm a lonely man, and this is the first magazine with colored pics.

Imo, there's way too many typos (and grammar errors) which you should look into. At least for me, that makes it hard to read

News that lightS you up

No.1 not Nr.1

Finally married! Read about the wedding!

Whose the oldest Dwarf alive? Find out inside!

1g 34s looks a bit too overpriced for some people ICly

Is that a....barcode?

Sorayah wrote:Imo, there's way too many typos (and grammar errors) which you should look into. At least for me, that makes it hard to read

Yeah I know, didn't had the time to make it corrected before the event and my word don't have the english corrector anymore for some reasons .

But well... not everyone had the chance to learn english in primary shool!

yes we are very sorry for the typos in there and remember this is the first one, it will probably and hopefully be better and better with time.

My english isnt very good either, and unfortunatly my spellcorrector is very busy atm. It would be easier if the magazine were in swedish (my mother language) but yes not all of us are swedish so im sorry again and hope you can deal with it until we can fix a proper spellcorrector ^^ maybe some of you can help us with this? i for one would be very greatful since i know i have some trouble with the english grammar.

But I think its good you leave your opinions so we can make a better one next time.

You can easily just PM me it before you publish it, I'll tell you what the typo's are then you can change it before you release it.

Awesome stuff from whitestar like always. You shouldn't worry too much about the feedback that has been given to you by the above posters as you have delivered some nice work yet their feedback is excellent, of course, and I wish you well on improving your magazine.

Will await the next edition! =)

Thanks Tashun/Galavan for your help later on, i sure will post the articles to you for some english grammar help!

And thank you Karkath/Márag For those lovely words

This is so great I am so happy to get to read the articles, especially the interview with the Ashpine hahah :p <3 vous avez bien fait Elloa <3

Merci Shaelyssa.

We will work on the next one, now ! We got some ideas and such, but don't hesitate to contact us if you want our reporter duo make a paper about you, your guild, or your event (everything 100% IC obviously)