The birth of Thistla

I dont know where this topic belongs exaclty since its more a comic than a written story.
If i placed it wrong i appologize and ask you to move it to its right place.

And pls dont judge to hard first attempt for me to ever try anything like this in comicstyle xD i had fun though.

The birth of Thistla part 1
The birth of Thistla part 2

Very nice looking and an interesting story. There's only one thing I'd criticize. The speech bubbles, I got a bit confused as to which to read first and accidentally read the second one before the first one on two occasions. Perhaps make the one to read first a bit higher up then the second one or some such?

Still though, nicely done overall.

thanks saihna, i actually thought of that but it was to late when i already got the pix together..guess i didnt see it until the end since i know how it should be. anyways i will fix that in other comics if i do other ones

That's new. And It's fun to read Felitzia's story of "missing her beauty" and this lass going all "wooohooo I'm undead new powers!".
I also accidentaly read one of the bubbles wrong, read the second before the first.

Also...
"Ye know nothing of hate!"

Quite good I say, need some drama to harshen things up when Dorik takes a break with his misadventures.