Constructive Criticism
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Constructive Criticism
by Hermie Wed Jun 06, 2012 9:29 pm
Due to the fact stories are locked in the off-chance that the writer wishes to continue the story without the thread looking messy or getting confusing, there is no place to add constructive criticism which all past, present and future story-writers on this section (I'm sure) would like to receive.
So if you wish to post about things you liked, things you didn't, things that could've been better, etc. Simply write the story's title in bold, and then under, any constructive criticism!
So if you wish to post about things you liked, things you didn't, things that could've been better, etc. Simply write the story's title in bold, and then under, any constructive criticism!
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Re: Constructive Criticism
by Ruby Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:59 pm
The Medical Bay
This was quite confusing! But then again, confusion is a gnome's greatest weapon (after like, guns and knives and magic and shit), so maybe that was the point.
After the Attack
My only complaint is that Hermione isn't nearly as scary in the stories as she is in game. Other than that I liked them!
Also, this section needs more stories about tazering.
This was quite confusing! But then again, confusion is a gnome's greatest weapon (after like, guns and knives and magic and shit), so maybe that was the point.
After the Attack
My only complaint is that Hermione isn't nearly as scary in the stories as she is in game. Other than that I liked them!
Also, this section needs more stories about tazering.
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Re: Constructive Criticism
by Hermie Fri Jul 13, 2012 3:53 pm
The Booty-Bay Experience
This is currently happening ICly although no one is actually roleplaying it out. It is merely an insight into what Hermie would be doing should I still be playing and as such shall be updated weekly.
This is currently happening ICly although no one is actually roleplaying it out. It is merely an insight into what Hermie would be doing should I still be playing and as such shall be updated weekly.
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