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Post by Mirian Lightguard Thu Jun 23, 2011 3:16 pm

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Had time during a smoke brake to draw alittle again.. was looong time ago.. hand is not as stabil as it was before..
Anyhow say what you think and what you think i shall improve.. ect ect.
thanks again <3
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Post by Mirian Lightguard Thu Jun 23, 2011 3:17 pm

and sorry for the pic kvality.. used my mobilephone to snapshot this.
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Post by Eodan Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:20 pm

I'm not a huge drawing critic or expert, but I can tell you I do like it! Great work. =3
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Post by Mirian Lightguard Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:25 pm

Eodan/Calath wrote:I'm not a huge drawing critic or expert, but I can tell you I do like it! Great work. =3
Thank you <3
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Post by Ralegh Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:05 am

The neck seems a bit thin.
A bit more shading could also improve it a lot.
But eh, looks nice!
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Post by Gesh Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:36 am

Shows alot of promise, also don't allow small critisms from people to upset you to much. We all see different things when we look at a single drawing.

I particularly like the nose and the lips, but the jaw is alittle weak. ^^
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Post by Sanara Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:27 am

Eyes are uneven (as in, off-center, unevenly sized, etc) and the perspective on the eyes, nose and lips is quite off. It's not bad, really, especially for a quick sketch, but it could use some fine-tuning to the details!
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Post by Mirian Lightguard Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:58 pm

Thank you all for you advise and compliments.. shall take evryone in and do one better..
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Post by Lexgrad Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:38 pm

better than I can do! i pressed good. I guess all skills improve with work but at the moment it looks good to me and would to like to see more
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Post by Mirian Lightguard Sun Jun 26, 2011 2:19 pm

im on it--
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Post by Gesh Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:24 pm

i believe we have a thread where we can post Art and creative peices aswell. Stickied infact Smile
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Post by Mirian Lightguard Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:16 am

Well did not find it before it was to late.
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